Kia Ora Bloggers,
Today I am going to show you guys how I write a quality comment. First I start with saying Hi or Kia Ora then the persons name. After I do that I write what I liked about it, what they could work on and last but not lease something helpful for next time. Here is my comment that I commented on a person from Hay Park Schools blog!
I started off by saying something thoughtful. I said I liked the choices of want he put like watermelon, chips, mince and banana. Then I said something positive. The second thing I said was I agree that watermelon is healthy for you and also yummy. Then I put something helpful, I said maybe next time he could add somethings that are not food like clothes and swimming togs.
Kia Ora Keti,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Charlotte and I am a blog commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey. What an awesome comment that you posted!
I think that it is great that you described your thought process that you had when writing your comment (what was positive, thoughtful, and helpful about the comment).
I noticed that you wrote about watermelon in your comment! I also love watermelon, it is very refreshing. My favourite fruit is strawberries, but watermelon is a close second! What is your favourite fruit?
I hope to see you continue to take part in the Summer Learning Journey this summer and look forward to seeing your posts in the future! Don’t forget to submit the link to your comment using this form. .
Ngā mihi nui
Charlotte
Summer Learning Journey