Kia Ora whanau, here is my writing about The big bad wolf. This writing is describing big bad wolf.
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The big bad wolf
In a cloudy black gigantic forest, there lived a big bad wolf. He was always hiding in the dark away from the light. If any animal saw him, they would race away not looking back at all. All the animals in the forest went away, no one could even find a single animal in the forest.
The big bad wolf had huge razor sharp teeth and pointy claws. He was hairy, smelly and hideous. He also has scruffy fur that would always get tangled in the branches from the trees. He looked like he hadn’t had a shower for years and he was always getting himself in trouble. He was terrifying, misty and mysterious. His claws could slice a tree in a swipe, he had a shiny soppy nose. He is emotionless, sad eyes never glowed, except for at night.
The big bad wolf is awful, greedy, selfish and cheeky. He has a hateful heart and he mimics people's voices. He is a cunning monster and he despises the little red riding hood and her grandma. He's disgusting and he seems nice when you meet him but he has a dark heart inside. He hunts down small beloved bunnies when they don't expect it, but he does. The wolf is lousy and wicked.
He has a dark heart, that is full of lies. He pretends and he tricks the innocent ones. He is selfish, nasty and a big fat liar, his actions weren’t right. He ate grandma and he was going to eat little red riding hood as well. That wouldn’t be right.
After his punishment I think he could have learned his lesson. He also should have changed and have been cleaning the grandma's house for her until she gets better. When she gets better, he can go in the corner of the forest, where he belongs and so he can’t hurt anyone ever again.
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