Kia Ora whanau, Here is my writing that I wrote about the beach, hope you guys like it!
Blake's family went to the beach today to go for a swim. Blake had two brothers and one sister, her brothers' names were Brooklyn and Bryce. Her sister’s name was brook, they hung out with each other all the time except in school because they weren’t in the same class. They changed into their swimming togs and started swimming but then they remembered to put sunscreen on. They put sunscreen on then hopped in the ocean, Blake’s Mum and Dad kept looking at the coconut trees but also kept watch of the kids.
Blake and Brook were having a breathing contest which is basically who could stay underwater the longest. Blake came up thinking she won but instead she didn’t see anyone there. She thought they were still in the water so she waited, she didn’t see anyone so she decided to check if anyone was in the water but no one was there. She didn’t see her family at all, only other families and other people, She tried calling out but no one listened.
She was getting scared and decided to get some coconut and drink them because she was SO HUNGRY and SO THIRSTY but then she started to fall to the ground. She woke up and felt like she had been in a coma for years, her parents said that when her and Brook did the challenge you drowned and have been in the hospital for two days. Blake's parents were happy and went back to the beach with no breathing contest allowed. When they finished having a swim they went to have ICE CREAM.
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