Alien's experience on earth

Kia Ora bloggers, today on my classes google meet we did writing. We had the choice to chose to do an Aliens experience on earth, a holiday or Charlie and the chocolate factory. I chose an Alien's experience on earth. We had to have at least one Metaphor and simile in your writing. I have a couple, I hope you guys like it. 

My Writing-

I was sitting in my UFO watching the stars. They were as bright as the sun, while I was watching the stars my UFO malfunctioned and I had to land on the nearest planet and that planet was planet Earth. I landed in what seemed to be a backyard as human’s call it. It looked clean and was very quiet until suddenly human’s came out of the door.

I hid in my UFO while the human’s inspected it. Just as they were about to enter it started raining out of nowhere. I heard the human’s shout “Get inside it’s raining cats and dogs”. I got confused as I saw there were no cats and dogs. I didn’t even know what cats and dogs were until I saw two hairy things come out of the door. I heard a human call out “Janie where are the dogs”, then I realised that the things outside with me are dogs.

I got out of my UFO to say hi when the dog started barking for no reason. The dog was as loud as a siren. The dog looked like he had a heart of gold but he was terrifying, like my mum when she was mad at my dad for not doing the dishes and making dinner. I Heard on earth the dad goes to work and the mum stays home but for alien’s the mum goes to work and dad stays home, because the mum's stronger. I hopped back in my UFO and stopped at a store called McDonalds, I guess they gave me a discount because when I entered they gave me everything for free. Humans are so nice, I’ll make sure to visit again soon but with all my friends who are on Mars!