Friday, June 5, 2020

Dog biscuits

Kia Ora whanau, I have wrote a narrative about two dogs that grew huge.


Dog biscuits/ Magic biscuits

When Brian gave his dogs the biscuits they started growing, Brian went inside because he had
to put the biscuits away in his cupboard so his dogs didn’t get anymore. When Brian came outside he saw that his dogs were  massive, like the size of his house. Brian freaked out and got the biscuits out and gave them more, Brian thought if they had more of the biscuits his dogs would grow smaller but he was wrong. Instead of his dogs getting smaller they went even bigger
 than what they were before.

Brian couldn’t think, he didn’t know what to do and neither did his brother that stayed with him because he couldn’t find a house that didn’t cost that much. So Brian offered to stay with him.. The dogs kept eating the biscuits but Brian took it off so they wouldn’t grow anymore, Brian and his brother Luke went to go and get their sisters Brooke and Blake.

 When they got back they saw that the dogs were their normal size, when Brian saw that he went to hug his dogs and while he was hugging his dogs Blake and Brooke went and put the dog biscuits in the trash while Luke went back to sleep. Brian knew he wouldn’t buy from that store again.

 Hope you guys enjoyed reading my narrative about magic dog biscuits.

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